Chapter 1:
There he was, Roak Ferpo. Neeko was looking at him through the crosshairs of his snipers' scope. "I've got you now...." he murmmered to himself. He tested the grip on his sniper. It was perfect, as usual. He pushed his finger around the trigger. He loved the sound of his glove closing around the trigger, it meant he would get his payment. He slowly started to pull his finger to the back of the trigger hold. It was almost pulled back completely when some of Ferpo's gaurds walked up. Maybe I can take them, he thought. He counted to see how many there were.
There were ten not counting Ferpo. Neeko knew when he was out-gunned. "You have won this time, Ferpo," he told himself. He was going to have to try a different approach. He put his sniper back in it's holster and walked off. He took out his comm and contacted Lord Angral. "I am almost done," he said. "Good," replied Angral, then he closed the conversation.
Neeko walked up to the front door of Ferpo's strong hold and rang the door bell. A guard answered. "Y-Y-your Neeko Fe....." his voice ended. The end of Neeko's blaster was steaming. "Heh, no one ever finishes that sentence," he said. He then proceeded insinde........
So, what do you think?
